Saturday 11/30/13

This is my third post for this week.
I want to take this opportunity to thank publicly those of you who took the time to over look my document 3 during this class. This class it has been challenging because it is a new experience for me to have online and actual class room in the same course. But I am really enjoying it, even though I'm out of town I can still complete school work from where I am.

2blogg "Happy Turkey Day"...

Hello everyone,
 How's everyone doing in their Doc3? About me, I'm still edeting, but for sure it will be ready on Monday. The arguments that we added in abstract are very helpful. It helps me a lot to make my document clear.
Regards to all and Happy Thanksgiving....

1Monday 11/25/13

Hello everyone,
     We just did the Rhetorical Analysis in Doc3, according to the Doc3 I reviewed stated the good ideas on how students wants to finish college, to have a better foundation in life, and  to get a better job, but because of the tuition is high and not enough help students are forcely drop out to college. 
The arguments here: Students want to finish school but tuition and fees are high. When you work hard as a full time student/worker you don't get any financial aid or any help unless you take a student loan, that 's tough. (This is a good argument "student vs. tuition fees).
     

Arguments (11/21/13)

This is my post regarding arguments in Chapter 6:
Moving your audience by using: Ethos, Pathos, and Kairos by using these three works together to create an impact on the reader.
According to Aristotle, Video of Pathos: the argument must have and emotional impact to your audience why? because you'll see that your argument is affecting the audience, and see the point of view of your writing. According to Aristotle the audience feels several state of emotions love, anger, hate, fear, confidence, pity, envy, and contempt. When your audience reach these state of emotions your reach the success as a writer.

Doc3 Argument and answer.

  This is for Doc3

• Ask question: Is education important to us (young and adult)?
• Give answer: Yes,
• Give reasons, using because:
• because theirs is no limit on gaining more knowledge for both young and adult.
• because an adult getting more education is better especially when you change to a new career, get a better pay, and better yourself.
• because as a parents it help us educate ourselves and it gives better example to our children.
• because without an education you will not get a good paying job. In his situation the biggest problem of people not getting an education is because the cost of it.
• My argument is, for the adult people wants to continue their education but not getting any help (like financial aid) because of work it increase the income higher or if you are married, you are not getting any help at all. Its really unfair because some people gets all the aid they can because they're not working or not married.
• The highereducation.org is one of my reference where I will get some info.

I hope this is right...
Thanks
Leonife

Doc2 Argument and answer.

Monday 11/18/13

Review Doc2 & recreate argument in blog post using this format to identify reader and issue:

• Ask question: Should middle class Americans with health insurance support ACA

Answers:
               Yes, the middle class Americans should support ACA.

• Because it gives the young adults under the age of 26  to have a better coverage by being with their parents insurance policy.
• Because after the age of 26 but under the age of 30, the ACA have an options to choose of what insurance coverage  they want and be able to afford as well.
• Because, with this insurance protection help a lot of citizens to have better care and affordable cost, and for people that cannot the ACA helps them as well to find a coverage that would suit them.
• Because before ACA or this act, the insurance will remove the young adults in their parents policy without any notice unless they are full time college student.

TGIF-11/15/13

To all,
Its Friday for all people have fun, except me because I am working..but its all good. Don't forget to start your Doc. 3 and also your Week 7 Assessment. I am trying to do this document but I can't think enough how to start. anyway, I'll get to it. Have a nice weekend and drive safe

Faye

11/13/13 Wed blog...

 
My passion is for Education for adult.  Many of us as an adult trying to pursue or change carreer, but its difficult because you work full time and have family.  As an adult you are trying to balance everything, but now that you finally want to go back to school and tyring to seek for help no one can give you but a student loan, just because you work full time and have a husband that work as well.
   So far this is all I can say.....

I finally finished

Hello everyone,
I am finally done, hopefully is correct. This essay is challenging and a lot of reading. 
Anyway good luck to all.
Leonife

Monday 11/11/13

Hello everyone,
     I just finished my midterm in one of my class.  Anyway Evidence is a very important word, well we use this to prove a statement, facts, cases, or any testimony.  When we are writing we need  a  proof or a clear statement to get the attention of our readers/audience.  Also in our Writing Arguments book  page it explain on how to use "Evidence" effectively.
  
Thanks,
Faye

Patient Protection Affordable Care Act

Hello everyone,
     There is so many issues or controversial regarding the Obama care act, for many people still not clear for how it work.  Well, anything pertaining to any medical health its always been an issue.  People with pre-existing condition or not will be able to keep their insurance, unless their company is not giving them an insurance . A lot of business with 50 about employees or more has to give insurance to their workers.  Hopefully this will work.
Faye
   

11/7 (Thursday)

Hello everyone,
     Thank you for my evaluator all the comments that you all did, I will resolve those issue soon, but not today I just finished my last assignment in my computer class wow, am I glad.  One down two to go for this quarter.  Its a lot of work especially when your working full time, and have family. 
     Arguing is always the issue no matter what? because we are all different and also we are all human being that makes mistakes.  In chapter 4 we learned about the kinds of arguments and also the different fallacies.
Thank you all have a nice weekend.
Leonife

Hello

Good afternoon everyone,
     How's everyone doing...well this is it.  We have to be ready today for our peer review.  Last Monday Prof. Hamon gave us a good example on how to do it, so far it did help a lot plus the reading of online text about the Obama Care Act.  And thank you  class mates for sharing the website on where to get the ideas for our topic. 
Leonife

Good morning

Good morning classmates and Prof. Hamon,
This is it, today is the day to submit our essay, finally I am done.  This is a lot of work and reading but it is worthwhile in a long run.  I will see you all in class.
Faye

Regarding argument for Workshop 5

To all,
   Workshop  5 is pertaining on how the arguments depend on strength and a logical structure.  And also I learned about the successful argument that requires 3 components, a claim, reason, and grounds.  The videos are very helpful and funny specially the teacher arguing with the students.  Also very educational the different kinds of fallacies. (slippery slope, red herring, ad hominen, and proctor hoc, and more) but video about short people song is funny and good as well.
That's all folks......
faye

My experience learning more about Obamacare.

Hello everyone,
     I'm still working on my paper about the obamacare, this is a lot of reading, but I'm learning more about this that I didn't know before.  Hopefully I can finish this on Monday.
Good luck everyone.
Faye